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下一个目标——打算到a4e去混混

下一个目标——打算到a4e去混混

原来a4e是Anime for(4) Ever的意思。而和EnA(Eien no Anime)一样。但是不是一家人。于是想去报道一下。考虑一下报道怎么写,我不想出洋相,所以大家帮忙看一下,有没有语法或者逻辑错误的。

Hello everyone. I am Zero. I am from Shanghai China. Just like you, I am intersted in animes comics and games.
First, why I am called as "Zero"? The year 2000, a friend of mine offered me a game names "Rockman X4". I like Zero and he likes X. So, I am Zero since that.
Next, why I am intersted in ACG? I was a good player, but my father didn't want me to play so much video games. So I became worse and worse in playing video games. I am not an excellent player anymore and stop watching animes since I was 16-year-old. Many friends still don't believe that I have never watched anime "Slam Dunk" and "Detective Conan". Yes, these animes were hot at that time, but I didn't watch them.
Then, why I picked up animes again? That is also because of my father. The year 2004, one day in July, my father noticed that I was playing the game "Angelic Serenade", he didn't see the character clearly and said that "It's a mouse." I was angry. Is Klinon a mouse? If so, what is Saphy looks like? Then my father saw these characters clearly and fixed his words.
Yes, my dad is a lolicon. He said that anime girls are cute for they have big eyes. But he never admit that he likes those girls.
So from that time, I become interested in animes, not only for those girls. I introduce some classical animes to my father. However, my father is so strange. For example, he always imitates Izumi Konata dancing. But he likes Tohsaka Rin even he doesn't know her name. I think that it should be descendiblity that I like animes just like my father.
Finally, why I enter to a4e? The first reason is that I like English subtitled animes. No matter the voice is Japanese or English. Even without English voice, English subtitles are the best. I watched some subtitles made by Static-subs, Ayu, A.F.K., EnA and so on, and find that their jobs are excellent. Fruit Basket is the anime I missed to watch. These days, I found it and found a4e. It's true that a4e's works are very impressive. So I come to this website and communicate with you.

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既然最后用了Finally,一开始的First改成Fisrtly会比较好吧,还有最后那段,The first reason的first直接拿掉吧...因为我没找到second reason...
其他的都可以吧,至少猪觉得没什么问题...

猪的一点小小拙见...希望能帮到ZERO...
PS:54猪比较好...英语很久没好好使用了...

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英语无能
飘过
补习英语了~

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